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Undertale: A story written by the reader - Ch1-P4 by Rhay-Robotnik Undertale: A story written by the reader - Ch1-P4 by Rhay-Robotnik
A talking flower, how curious. You wonder what your should do at this strange seing.

Don't forget to comment if you want the story to continue. =) (Smile)

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comic explanation
Reader will comment on what could happen at the next page, influencing Frisk on their decision, a bit like in the game. 
The road that Frisk will take, the decisions they will take and the ending they will reach will be based on the readers. 
There will be even possibility to do actions that you're usually unable to do in a game. So, the possibility will be up to the imagination. 
Will you try to help everyone or break everyone dreams?

Every comments will be taken in consideration and along with some page, polls will be set for some important decision. 
Ex: Have mercy for a monster or kill it
Pick up something to reply
Blabla
Sooo, there will be some delay between the page to give time to peoples to comments and answer polls.
I will create a tumblr specially for this comic as well. (right here astorywrittenbythereader.tumbl… )

Frisk, Flowey, Undertale © Toby Fox
Art © Rhay-Robotnik
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:iconelmehdibenayyad:
ElmehdiBenayyad Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2018  Student Digital Artist
is this dead?
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:iconclw23:
clw23 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2017  Student Digital Artist
beautiful work!
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Professional General Artist
Thank you!^^
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:iconcinna--bun:
Cinna--Bun Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
i am in love
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017  Professional General Artist
*Thumb up* I'm glad to hear!
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:iconwolfsummoner295:
Wolfsummoner295 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
*You crouch down head-to-head with the Golden Flower
*Out of your mouth, escapes a strained gasp as a bright red heart flashes before your eyes
*The world fades to black and white, as you stare at the flower
"My name's Flowey, Flowey the Flower!"
*The flower winks at you
*You scooch backwards, fumbling over your own legs
"You're new around here arent'cha?"
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:iconleah-the-kiwi:
Leah-the-Kiwi Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
STOMP ON THE FLOWER
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2017  Professional General Artist
Oh wow, ahah.
Thanks for the suggestion.
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:iconjessieofthewolves:
JessieoftheWolves Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
walk away from the said "flower"
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2017  Professional General Artist
Ahah, it made me laugh.
I like how it the complete opposite of others suggestion. Thanks for the suggestion =P
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:iconjessieofthewolves:
JessieoftheWolves Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob ;)
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:iconmenollysagittaria:
MenollySagittaria Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A flower? With eyeballs? 

You wonder if it has a blood supply, too. Maybe it's an animal that's camouflaged like a flower? Will it let you get close enough to see if it has pink skin around its eyes? You consider asking it to stick out its tongue. 
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the sugestion =3
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:iconlada-zhe:
Lada-Zhe Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017
*Doubt has crept into the soul. You don`t trust the smiling flower out of a sense of self-preservation. Too suspiciously friendly look*

*You don`t respond with mutual affability to the flower. Standing away from him. You don`t trust him at all. But from curiosity you ask about your whereabouts*

*The flower is somewhat lost from human behavior. But with a broad smile answers the question*

- It isn`t polite to answer questions without attesting. I'm Flowey the Flower! You are soooo tangled. Let me explain what's what. You are in the Underground. The place where monsters live.

* You are somewhat twitch from his words. A whole race of monsters. Scary and huge monsters. Monsters, which with fangs and claws can easily rip a person to pieces. These horrifying thoughts betray your fear in stiffness and shaking *

* The flower laughs gaily over the reaction of the child, covering the mouth with a petal *
- Don`t be afraid, my friend! Monsters aren`t bloodthirsty creatures from your legends. However... they will want to kill you.

*The last sentence makes you cry out. Cold shivers run down my spine. You are afraid to stare at the silent plant. Your body is shaking from the realization of danger for your life *
*Unnoticed for you, Flowey blurs in a malicious and wry smile. He begins to speak insinuatingly, as if calming a person*

- Shshshshsh. It's okay, buddy, old Flowey to take care of your soul.
- Soul?

*You look inquiringly at the flower. Flowey again responds with a smile and laughs*

- Oh, forgive my forgetfulness. Every creature has a soul. The soul is the culture of your existence. The monster has a white and inverted heart. People, like you, have colors that denote the dominant character trait. Let me show.

*From your chest tingling bursts burning red heart. You are contemplating the cartoon heart with enchantment. Flowey looks at your soul with a pensive look*

- Wow, my friend, you have a special soul. Your main quality is Determination! It`s wonderful...

*Above Flowye rose somebody's shadow. The petals descended. Flowey hunched over the imminent threat. He raises his eyes and stutters*

- Dove-but-but didn`t se-s-e, m-mooma...

(I'm sorry for bad English, I hope you like this piece of history)

I will wait for the continuation of this wonderful comic book. I fell in love with your style! And I love this technique of execution!
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017  Professional General Artist
Hello there! Thanks for the suggestion! =D
Do not worry about your English. I aways have someone to look over the text for grammar, correction and such. ^^

And thanks a bunch for this wonderful comment. It really appreciated and mean a lot. =)
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:iconkittykat123-lau:
*You're confused. You watch as the flower introduce themselves. The underground? Then, a heart shape appear in front of you. You listen in on the instructions

(IM SORRY ITS BAD)
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:iconrhay-robotnik:
Rhay-Robotnik Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017  Professional General Artist
Ah, don'T worry, it quite alright. =)
Thanks for the comment^^
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:iconkittykat123-lau:
KittyKat123-Lau Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017
np
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